Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Listerine

A fun(ny) poem I wrote. Enjoy :)
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You said,
You taste like saliva.
I said,
Let’s change that aroma.

I pulled a strip out.
It was thin and green;
Designed to melt on the tongue.
Yet the taste was not a pleasant thing.
Strong. Over powering indeed.
But the need for some fresh was greater to heed.

I looked down
The pack was all finished up;
The last in your mouth
Causing your breath to smell cleaner than hyssop.

You twinkled,
Wanna share?
I grinned.

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